Writing 201 : Poem Assignment #3
Device: Internal Rhyme
Every day, people change in every way.
Most of the story I made up, has a trustworthy backup.
Oblivion to anyone but me, thoughts playing out to see
The reactions they get, from people they have met.
Invitations were inevitable, if only they were amicable.
Otherwise they say something, and mean something else.
Nobody shows their real feelings, for they fear dealing.
Shadows of secrets remain covered in closets.
The Writing 201 course is much more difficult than I thought it would be! Am already behind on the assignments, and there must be even tougher assignments ahead in the next week. Maybe because am forcing myself to use all the three things given and combine them to write my poem, am feeling I have been trapped! My free flow creativity gets hampered because of such constraints. Nonetheless, many people are doing it easily and so should I. And am so happy and excited as I am learning such new things.
But am also worried because I am not being able to access the Commons. Same problem I encountered earlier, due to email address mismatch I suppose. Hence am not able to get any feedback properly. So please please, leave your feedback, I would appreciate it so very much. Thanks in advance! 😉