Arriving at the beach, she reflected on her life. Nothing seemed to distract her – the warm breeze, the tidal waves or the noisy pelicans – none of them. It was a fairly beautiful day but not for Amaya. She couldn’t care less.
Her life choices had always been made for her. She never got to choose. This was a new territory for her – of having a choice. Scared to the core, thinking about what will happen next, has left her completely baffled.
Now if only she could ascertain whether to go back to the life of petty crime or to surrender herself for the murder she never committed. Tough first choice.
Choice to save herself or the person who has been controlling her life since forever.
Deep in thoughts, she was staring into nothingness of the horizon. Suddenly her chain of thoughts were disrupted by a cute german shepherd, who came looking for its frisbee which got stuck in the branches of a big tree standing tall behind the rocks.
For a minute, Amaya forgot all about her tensions and started petting the canine. “Hey big guy! What are you doing here? Go play near the water.” Pointing to the frisbee, the dog communicated what it wanted. Amaya got the frisbee, looked at the happy go lucky dog, kissed him goodbye and threw the frisbee as far as she could.
Just as she watched the german shepherd bounce toward the flying saucer, carefree, enjoying the moment, she got up, held her head high with determination and with a big smile on her face, she took the first step toward her freedom.
Monday’s Finish The Story. The challenge was to start the story with the given sentence and photo; finishing the story in 100-150 words. Second attempt. Sorry for exceeding the word limit, got carried away! Thanks for reading! ❤
It’s funny the little things that can happen, or that one sees, which lead us towards the solution to a difficult decision.
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Absolutely! We should keep our eyes open to read those “signs”. 😉
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Nice story with a great message. Nature definitely gives lessons in many ways. Nice take on the prompt. 🙂
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Thanks PH. We do have a lot to learn from nature. Glad you liked it! 🙂
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A life of crime? Could you be persuaded to write some more on this? I’m intrigued.
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Wow! M happy that someone is interested in the back story. Maybe I’d write it. Stick around to know more. 😉
Thanks for the persuasion!
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An excellent story of letting go and achieving freedom! Thank you for writing for the MFtS challenge! I hope you tune back in on Monday! Be well… ^..^
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Thanks so much. Glad you liked it!
I wanted to write for the laughing flowers pic too but just didn’t get time! I enjoy MFtS challenge.
You too be well. 🙂
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That makes me happy that you enjoy the challenge! Thank you for the well wishes! 🙂
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I’m glad she chose freedom from a life of crime and taking the rap of murder for her boyfriend! (It also sounds like she is a dog whisperer). Great story!
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Thank you PJ. Really happy to know you liked the story! N it would be so cool to be a dog whisperer. 😉
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I agree – it would be cool to be a dog whisperer.
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Oh great! So you are a dog person too? 🙂
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Yes! 🙂
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It is very nice to meet you, officially! 😉
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Nice meeting you too!
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Sometimes the tiniest moments can have the largest impact on us. Well done…
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True. Thank you. 🙂
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You go Amaya, hey, dogs can inspire 🙂 Positive vibes.
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Really glad you liked it Noir. 🙂 🙂
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Beautifully written. Well done.
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Thanks dear. You made my day! 🙂
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